Crazily Ever After? (Tanka)

by Meme   Oct 3, 2012


We both entitled
one another with names we
only understood.
We shall keep this in between,
you my king and I your queen.

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© Copyright 2012 by: gIrL
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**Dedicated to Darren .. Where crazy meets crazy, right?**

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  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    This is just like you Meme, like a fellow member, Thomas said. I just loved how you compared the bond of friendship in grandeur. Very sublime and sweet. You're the Queen of tanka and senryu. So i expected you to come up with something as beautiful as you. Cute and adorable, wish i could touch it. Well i can feel it literally, so that does it ;-). Lovely message dear. Can't say more than to admire your creativity. You've just said it all. Cheers! :) ..

  • 12 years ago

    by Thomas

    Short and sweet, just like you Meme?

    This is my style of poem but I liked it anyways, well done!

    • 12 years ago

      by Meme

      Well thank you T :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Lmao Luce!

    Meme, I didn't know you were crazy! I need to see this side of you!

    Very cute Tanka :) I loved it!!

    • 12 years ago

      by Meme

      Hehehe, lol Chels! Are you sure you want to see that side? :P

  • 12 years ago

    by Darren

    My queen, i love this piece.
    You have made a gobby man speechless.

    Always your king.

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    It's in between!

    No one knows the secret, it's still a secret and as a secret it shall remain, until someone decides it should no longer be a secret.

    And here, I see that there is no secret, hence, Meme this is good. Lol

    • 12 years ago

      by Meme

      Lol, well thanks a lot Luce ;)

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