by Poet on the Piano Oct 4, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
One month |
by Chelsey
Finally Ive come back to comment because I loved this so much. What I love is that it was a free write and that it was kind of all over the place. Sometimes those poems without flow are the best ones! |
I love the simplicity and thinking beyond this poem. You have provided through your words a key to a door to your thoughts allowing us into your life and how quickly you feel life flows by. I love the realism behind the words allowing the reader to reflect on their own life and the quick manovouring of life from day to day and the struggles that come and go. |
I love the simplicity and thinking beyond this poem. You have provided through your words a key to a door to your thoughts allowing us into your life and how quickly you feel life flows by. I love the realism behind the words allowing the reader to reflect on their own life and the quick manovouring of life from day to day and the struggles that come and go. |