I love the simplicity and thinking beyond this poem. You have provided through your words a key to a door to your thoughts allowing us into your life and how quickly you feel life flows by. I love the realism behind the words allowing the reader to reflect on their own life and the quick manovouring of life from day to day and the struggles that come and go.
I can relate well to this piece as well as many others, life is travelling at such instant speeds that we look back on a few months ago like it was so long ago and realise that so much has happened inbetween and it at times is so hard to keep up or stay in continuation with the flow.
I love how you have captured this so well.
Well thought out and written
Was a great poem to read and reflect on
5.5

I love the simplicity and thinking beyond this poem. You have provided through your words a key to a door to your thoughts allowing us into your life and how quickly you feel life flows by. I love the realism behind the words allowing the reader to reflect on their own life and the quick manovouring of life from day to day and the struggles that come and go.
I can relate well to this piece as well as many others, life is travelling at such instant speeds that we look back on a few months ago like it was so long ago and realise that so much has happened inbetween and it at times is so hard to keep up or stay in continuation with the flow.
I love how you have captured this so well.
Well thought out and written
Was a great poem to read and reflect on
5.5

Finally Ive come back to comment because I loved this so much. What I love is that it was a free write and that it was kind of all over the place. Sometimes those poems without flow are the best ones!

I loved the countdown in this, the sadness, the regret, the disbelief. It was like everything you were feeling for this person was laid out on the table and you didn't hold back. I really enjoy those kind of poems that don't have structure, or metaphors, just a simple rant..

As weird as it always sounds, your sadness is beautifully displayed here Maryanne. The reader can truly get on your level when reading this and feel just as broken as you. At least I did.

Well done :)