Comments : Polaris

  • 12 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I feel like this is about a relationship went bad because love was never expressed enough like you wanted, neither through words nor actions because he was often too wrapped up in other interests, and not you. Or maybe on second thought, the reference to the PlayStation was a play on words saying he 'played' you. You begin to realize that the love wasn't mean to be, & that's heartbreaking. It's really sad when 'I love you' loses its meaning, I too believe it's important but when expressed too often it can lose its meaning also, though if you mean it each time that may not be the case. Men seem to express love less than females, yet I feel like they have their own ways of doing so though they may not always say the loving words we look for.

    The ending of this poem is so strong! I loved every bit of it...so brilliant, love the way your mind works. I feel like even though this poem is sad, I feel like the ending could be a way of saying though you're lost & devastated, that love will find it's way, the whole idea of the constellations makes one feel dreamy and feel hopeful that love can be found once again.

    This is one amazing poem, I love everything about it!