Comments : What Hope Looks Like

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This poem was soooooo deep. It had so much in it and with each new line you created another moment, a memory or a future image, all so vividly. It shows what the true things in life are, the things worth living for, the priceless things.

    Your tone through out this was mroe upbeat and inspiring and it was like this was what you were holding onto to get you through the darkness.

    Your title is very encouraging and makes us think of what our answer would be if asked what hope looked like for us, this could be a challenge for all poets to write our own view on this.

    You could tell that during the poem there was still a lot of sadness behind the eyes of the writer, but could definately feel their mind focusing on the good and positive things.

    Great write.