This poem has both qualities for sadness and depression but also for darkness as it gives out quite a dark and eerie feel when reading this.

Your wording is very powerful and the way you are kind of like in mid thought with yourself and so the questions come out aimed at the reader and make us think.

Maybe your title could be something to do with thinking? Like Darkened Thoughts?

the poem shouts out to me Dark, Depression, Isolated. Hopelessness. Maybe use one of those words in your title ?

Great imagery in this, short lines quicken the pace and it feels so dark it is untrue.

great write

I really like the wording you used. It really drew me into the poem. Keep it up.

I love poems like this, i could picture it all

Amazing! Very good write.

"In our safest sanctuary,
where ink bleeds
from obsidian walls and
from icy windows
we watch..." Classic, very poetic stuff ...