My suicide

by yup   Jun 29, 2004


Standing here alone
Clutching the knife in my hand
This pain is too much
No one understands

Should I cut my wrists?
Or plunge it in my heart
Either way Id suffer
So at my wrists I start

I watch as the blood
Begins to pour
I scream in pain
As it gushes to the floor

Deeper I plunge the knife in
It tears through my skin
Deeper I slice, my cuts big and red
My head begins to spin

I feel so weak
I drop to the floor
The pain was so great
I couldnt take it anymore

The last thing I hear
As I lie dieing on the floor
Please dont let go
But I go through the white door

~Please vote or comment if you get the chance! I really appreciate it~

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  • 19 years ago

    by SCARECROW

    ^v^

  • 19 years ago

    by Kia

    awesoem poem, very emotional. well written,

  • 20 years ago

    by Hidden Sinx

    -Hey-
    Loved Your Poem.. I Feel That Way Every Single Day. People Around Me Always Leaving The World Behind. Why Shouldnt I Go Ahead And Go .. Instead Of Letting The Pain Take Over Me.

  • 20 years ago

    by Samantha

    this poems is very sad...but incredibly written. It was amazing....it made me feel like i was right there as the girl was cutting hers wrists.