Comments : Be careful (senryu)

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    It's should have an apastrophe. Nice little haiku. Hope you will try more.

    • 12 years ago

      by Wafaa

      Thanks:) no i meant 'its' the possessive pronoun like 'his' or 'her'

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    A beautiful visual you draw here with this senyru... I love the entire description.which says so.much in such small verse..:)