Broken Heart. . .

by Tim Kline   Oct 6, 2012


With a shovel
I am digging my own tomb
With a blade
I am carving my own wounds
. . . Out with the blood
Bleeding down my veins comes love
F**k. . I am f**ked
No luck for me in this life
So, it's time for the knife and blade to slice this right
Frightened I am
Because of this slicing I'm about to do
This is some blue news, blood on my hands
And blackness burns away my miscues
. . . Always and forever
It was supposed to be
To the moon and back. . .
Nobody will ever see. .
Us go. Because these may just be my last words
As I collapse and pass my life
. . . Down on both knees.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Owner of an Untamed Heart

    I very much liked this piece. Terribly fantastic emotion oozing from your words; such raw feelings. I walked around the grammar errors because, somehow, I was so captivated with each word. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by With This Slow Tune I Tell You Goodbye

    Sweetie I'm sooo sorry PM me whenever okay? I'm the manager to this club sweetie granted this is my second account and btw sweetie it's supposed to be not how you wrote there are some grammer mistakes in this poem but you can fix the and the poem itself should be in sad darling oh and the poem was really good regardless of the grammer mistakes and the emotion is good

    • 12 years ago

      by Tim Kline

      I don't care for grammar. . I write my poem, then I post it. No proof read, re-writing. Just a one time go. But thanks.

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