Pure love

by Wafaa   Oct 6, 2012


My love to you is pure
it lives in my throat
alters tones of my voice
when I speak to you,
I am soft and tender
like silk touches skin
with innocence and care

to my heart, you're a soul
to my soul, you're more
passion flows in my blood
making me shiver
filling my brain with joy
and I fall for you
each day in a new way

Sweetheart, you're my sunshine
even when it's dark
even under the rain
you feed me with warmth
with a kiss on my lips
or a gentle touch
I am forever yours.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Let not the Start, overwhelm you. Where pleasure is vast, doom is known.

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Looooove this poem!!!

    I was gonna break it down but ive decided against it lol.....syrup is so right this is such an elegant and graceful write it made me read it four or five time straight off just so i could absorb it....the flow and word choice you created were magical and gave such a cool vibe to the piece...

    I really like your subtle use of repettion in it it gave it alot of depth and poise. :-)

    Love love loved it :-) great job sweety!

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    Lovely Sonia... I am in love with the beauty of this piece.. it shares such a beautiful bond and speaks your love... Blisful:)

  • 12 years ago

    by MyHalozChokinMe

    I have to agree with Maple, I also loved the line:
    "it lives in my throat
    alters tones of my voice"

    Beautiful play on words!

    • 12 years ago

      by Wafaa

      Thank you:-)

  • 12 years ago

    by Alanis

    My love to you is pure
    it lives in my throat
    alters tones of my voice
    when I speak to you,
    I am soft and tender
    like silk touches skin
    with innocence and care

    I smiled when I read this part.
    I absolutely loved the way this was
    Thought out and written down. So
    Beautiful.

    to my heart, you're a soul
    to my soul, you're more
    passion flows in my blood
    making me shiver
    filling my brain with joy
    and I fall for you
    each day in a new way

    Another amazing paragraph that leaves
    My with a idiotic smile or a teary eyed disposition lol

    Sweetheart, you're my sunshine
    even when it's dark
    even under the rain
    you feed me with warmth
    with a kiss on my lips
    or a gentle touch
    I am forever yours

    I thought the ending put it off a bit.
    Its shorter but also some powerful words in there.
    Great poem keep writing

    • 12 years ago

      by Wafaa

      Thank you:-)

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