Such a great write. A great style, breath-taking metaphors and most important of all; your lines breaks. I love them.

You've got a typo there: 'I I could' should've been 'if I could'

And yup, I am having a really nice weekend. ;) Hope you're too!
Missed ya.

"I only wanted
everything for you in a country
where our souls were nursed
from the same breast;"

Waw, mary anne. waw.

I think that just took my breath away it really did