Maps

Very creative.. the thought behind this is awesome and I loved the imagery of girls and crooked roads and directions... :)

Feelings acting like young girls
doing nothing but rope-skipping
Going up and down, non-stop
no time to stop or even think of tripping
Now I'm going of the path
where my thoughts visit dark alleys
with nothing to be found there
but drug addiction and dead end..

Bravo..

Oh, Whatever you do, just change the address of the app so it will take you into better alleys, sometimes those apps, they find the "fastest route" and end up taking us to god knows where, however, there are betters routes. It's just the app

I like this poem because of the feeling that conveys, the feeling of emptiness and feeling helpless but as you know me, I can't help be touched by your words.

Hence, I react like the above.

This piece made me think, but it was well written. The word choice is excellent and the style is great. I love how you conveyed the emotion and story. Wonderful job.

This is a sad but interesting poem. I really feel that you are conveying feelings of emptiness as well as abandonment. This poem is sad in an emotional way which is good because if a poem does touch your inner feelings it has convey a message.