Comments : You

  • 12 years ago

    by WanderingShade

    You can feel the emotion here. It's so simple but so powerful for those of us that have been through it before. Great write please keep it up.

  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Pretty deep write , the emotion leaps off the page
    Very well written :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I like rhyming poems so I enjoyed this, nice layout for the type of poem also so well done.

    Nice strong message about how you feel and how you are used to feeling this way. I related to the last line because sometimes you feel so low that you dont see a point in trying to get better because you cannot imagine a day when you ever could feel better, such a sad place to be.

    nice work

  • 12 years ago

    by kenzie

    I loved it, this was one of my favorites. keep writing(: