That's a perfect write, MaryAnne.
The way you spoke in there is really enticing. Insomnia at its best!!

Insomnia sucks! What is LP talking about lol.....the only thing insomnia is good for is getting amazing writes out of poets.

This is midnight though; it's how I came to know the night as
transmitting replies to those who forget what to dream

^ Those lines were so awesome! It reminds me of someone who wants to go to sleep so bad, but the night wont let them because these people are confused, literally dont know what to dream. Im not sure if you meant that to be taken literally but I did and it makes sense to me, Ive been there.

Awesome write!!