Comments : Bee (cinquain)

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    Ahh... how pleasant is this.. I like the apt words here.... And the entire picture of this piece is beautiful and speaks honey:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Mohan

    Amazimg written my friend

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    This piece made me smile, I like line about active and attractive the most, those two words rhyme.

    Pretty good, you thought about this one, I like that.

  • 12 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Very nice poem...Bees are very active and they give us the sweet pleasure of honey...simply sweet.

  • 12 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Very nice poem...Bees are very active and they give us the sweet pleasure of honey...simply sweet.