The Rose

by MyHalozChokinMe   Oct 7, 2012


Green, unawakened,

All the questing young

Energy directed toward an

Unknown flowering.

Opened for the world-

Bright, brief, questing

For appreciation.

Uncared for,

Tired, wilted,

Dormant inside

It's shelter.

Dark, quiet,

Inside it's life,

A little light,

A little care,

And it will bloom

Again.

~Club Challenge on Nature~

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  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Aww, this was both beautiful, sad, hopeful and uplifting all rolled into one. I have to say the shape is beautiful and looks like a rose itself. AMazing little poem and I loved your idea with it.

  • 12 years ago

    by MyHalozChokinMe

    Thank you. =) I REALLY appreciate that.

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Cara!!!!

    I really love this poem.. You dipped your toes in the nature realm.. and I know you weren't all that thrilled with doing a nature poem, I have to say you gave this rose poem a rich flare of the dark side... and it kicks!! in my opinion... love it!!

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