YES!!! glad you posted this poem.... I agree with the group... this was a bit disturbing... especially the ending... but I have to say I laughed from start to finish... it reminded me of a few crazy party nights I had in my day... it was full of whacky visuals and just a wild and fun fun poem!!

I loved it.
The last stanza, made me snort. Haha.

Hehehe I chuckled the whole way through this....so disturbing. Bad visuals , but hey, who cares? If it makes you laugh its always worth reading....

Nice imagination :)

I loved this one it made me laugh a lot!! great work it deserved to win:)

LMFAAAOOO. oh my god. I am dying of laughter. If I could count the number of times (besides wiping poo with a shower curtain) I have done something similar, I would be dead. LMAO, this comment showing up on everyone's account news who has me favorited - I apologize for you reading this! I am dying of laughter. Oh my god.

You are literally the walking version of the song "I Love College". xD

I can't even say "Good write, mate!" because I don't know what the hell to even say about this, Tony. LOL.

Ha ha ha ha...love it! 5/5.