It's sad i will admit with the touch of darkness and sweetie if you made this one just because good job but if you mean it don't die sweetie you have this family to help ya through whatever! you can PM me anytime if you feel down okay? and nice imagery and emotions more on the imagery side though...4/5

Its a sad poem and quite true it is

This was five years ago I'm glad you walked past through this darkest night. A poem I can relate to very much. It is a sad poem but a beautiful one too.