Confession of the Lost One

Brillant! You are learning to let go and write what you really are thinking about and feeling. It is nice to see you letting this go and not keeping it inside so much, I hope this is helping.

This poem is very powerful and shows the struggle not only for both individuals but the journey for you both together and how it feels like being on this journey was meant to be and that you wouldnt be without this person.

Lovely poem.

Omgosh, agree with Tony, I got goosebumps reading this.

The people who know you and your story will be deeply touched by this piece. Your words are incredibly written. Im glad your hubby confessed things to you, it helps you get a better understanding of what you were afraid to know, but need to know, in order to be there for him even more.

This is incredibly meaningful like the others have said. I loved this.

This is such a beautiful and meaningfull piece i absolutely love it.

' It was all about me,
for my broken wing
stormented my iris's 
to the point of blindness.'

^^this is my favorite stanza! it really shows how much we sometimes focus on ourselves too much that we miss what's going on with our partner.

amazing!

That was stunning sent goose bumps down me as usual you create somthing unique and meaningful
I love it
5/5