Wowww. Loved this! I usually get bored reading rhymed poetry. But my eyes just jumped from one line to the next almost in a sing-songy way when reading...

As I was reading, I could picture homeless people. In their plaid, chapped lips, dirty, drunken...seriously perfect imagery here. Great job!

The beginning was rough but then it got great,,fantastic wording, I loved it,great write 5/5