This is such a deep complex poem, reminds me of a song by otep called where the river ends... Listen to it and tell me what you think...

Really deep, real powerful and emotional. Gosh this was so realistic and sad, really mournful and just sick. You were easily able to put together such a vivid and chilling piece. Left me uneasy, great job. Sad that this actually happens..

Wow, this is a really powerful poem and well written. But it enrages me to think that people actually do this, it's messed up.

It made me nauseous.

Wow. This just leaves me sick. I can't stand to know that this kind of twisted cruelty happens. He deserves nothing.

You wrote with such pain. I could see a bit of hate when you described the photo.

And his hand, it leaves her cheek hot.
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This is my favorite line. I love the way you use your words. Choosing them wisely to not sound cliche.

Overall this poem disgusts me, you did I wonderful job writing this. 5/5 from me.

I am so sick after reading this horrible tale.

I don't know what to say...
This gutted me.

Always look out for this little girl, she's part of you.

Take care.