Dandelion

Good poem

I do like it, nice way of comparing the dandelion to a relationship as well as incorporating that quote towards the end. I like the way it was started, it created a great imagery. And above all, I like the serenity this piece gives.

This is a delightful piece of poetry. I don't think I've come across a poem about a dandelion before...people generally write about the more grander sister the rose!

I used to love blowing these little flowers and watching all the fluffy bits blow around in the breeze so this brought back some childhood memories to me.

The tone of the verse was very soft and gentle which was very much in keeping with the dandelion itself.

Enjoyed this very much..quite enchanting!

You have compared the Dandelion with a relationship/love. Love is indeed a delicate bond which needs to be nurtured and once it is tossed into the air without care it looses its wings, just like a love lost..a sad read indeed yet a lovely piece of nature :)

Very tender and subtle... I love the imagery here and a good attempt:)