This was lighthearted and uplifting, Zach.

Thanks for sharing, I love dandelions and loved the message inside:)

Well done,

5/5 Ingrid

This is so sweet to the ears and paints a beautiful imagery to the eyes. I love how you described the subject grandly and integrating details into it gave it a spark. Its sounds so serene and comforting to the senses and soothes the soul. I love nature poems alot. They speak to me and make me feel in a moment of paradise whenever am reading such. So rich and exotic and your words are choosen carefully and somewhat have a flawless flow.

I really loved what you put together here and you excellently pulled it off with an added magnificence arising from your unique touch. All poets have there uniqueness that identifies their poetry. Yours is awesome and it radiates within this poem. Keep writing, you're blooming in your poetry.
Kudos! :) ..

Amazing imagery! "Upon rich summer soil, deep with earthy smell".... I would say yes, yes, yes I can smell it! Good write! Ill dig into more of your works!

The imagery was fantastic throughout, a great poem about nature.

well written

Very tender and subtle... I love the imagery here and a good attempt:)

You have compared the Dandelion with a relationship/love. Love is indeed a delicate bond which needs to be nurtured and once it is tossed into the air without care it looses its wings, just like a love lost..a sad read indeed yet a lovely piece of nature :)

This is a delightful piece of poetry. I don't think I've come across a poem about a dandelion before...people generally write about the more grander sister the rose!

I used to love blowing these little flowers and watching all the fluffy bits blow around in the breeze so this brought back some childhood memories to me.

The tone of the verse was very soft and gentle which was very much in keeping with the dandelion itself.

Enjoyed this very much..quite enchanting!

I do like it, nice way of comparing the dandelion to a relationship as well as incorporating that quote towards the end. I like the way it was started, it created a great imagery. And above all, I like the serenity this piece gives.

Good poem