Excellent write Stephen, I enjoy going along with you down the busy streets listening to the bird's songs and the other norms that come along with city life.

My favorite stanza...

You smile, instantly putting the sun to shame, as you rush towards me engulfing my body and mind in the love and comfort of your arms.
Whispering into my ear how you've missed me, the tranquility in your voice brings complete peaceful bliss into my mind. In this moment
I wished for time to freeze with us locked
In the other's arms, but wishes don't come true and so we began to walk.

The simplest things like taking a walk with someone you love can brings a since of completeness and when that special person smile its touches your inner person. Great imagery nice story line...

Awwwww Stephen Im in love with this poem!!!!! Cute opening , like the metaphorical way of saying you are reminiscing!

Then my mind spoke to me about how beautiful
the simplicity in life is; if only time was taken
to admire it.

^ These lines were just stunning! So true..so so true. Very beautifully written I was so captivated by that statement!!

The last two lines in this poem made me melt...a girls dream, for every guy to whisper that in her ear. I could almost feeling it, breath in my ear, quiet voice whisper "Youre Perfect."

Just adorable, Im seriously in love with this poem! Well done!

YOU, YOU, YOU are perfect!!! And so is this poem.

I have to agree with Chels every women would want this to happen to her.. or lets at least say many do.

Thank you for being one of the few persons to inhale every bit of these moments and memorizing them so well(due to their importance and impact on you). I say that because your detailed discription makes it obvious how much attention you give her and how much you appreciate the moment.

Sigh.. beautiful!

I like the beggining

The title drew me in, :) great poem. had no problem keeping my attention through out!!

Nice:) I like it:)