Great poem full of emotions, I this poem is so powerful and sad that it touches the reader emotions. I like the finality of this piece and the determination to allow that person that has hurt you to rot. Great write.....

Great poem full of emotions, I this poem is so powerful and sad that it touches the reader emotions. I like the finality of this piece and the determination to allow that person that has hurt you to rot. Great write.....

Small critique, you say, "Your wings I taught was all white" I am guessing that should be, "thought."

Wanting a ride in the sky
Just beside the angel
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This line is interesting. It makes me visualize taking a ride with an angel. Very cool.

The line "Now is your doom," that to me is a bit confusing. Maybe write it differently?

Oh dang. That ending of yours...remind me never to get on your bad side! Great job!

Wow, it's so amazing, great job!