I absolutely LOVE that you added more to this from the challenge, it was wonderful before... but now it's amazing! |
by Mohan
I agree with hanna, amazimg written |
by Chelsey
:( I hate reading poems about losing people it breaks my heart in half. Its such a terrible feeling to go through whether it be lost love or death.... |
by Meme
I love using colors in poetry, gives you a sense of what the writer is feeling. |