Comments : In Monochromes (chained Senryu's)

  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    I absolutely LOVE that you added more to this from the challenge, it was wonderful before... but now it's amazing!

  • 12 years ago

    by Mohan

    I agree with hanna, amazimg written

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    :( I hate reading poems about losing people it breaks my heart in half. Its such a terrible feeling to go through whether it be lost love or death....

    But despite the sadness, I love this meme. You don't see the color burgundy used much in poetry, I've only used it once myself but I love the color, and love how it described an Octobers sun.. that was beautiful..

    Loving the attempt on chained senryus. This was excellent. :)

    • 12 years ago

      by Meme

      I love using colors in poetry, gives you a sense of what the writer is feeling.

      And Thanks a lot for the comment sweetie :)