My only wish...
is that my thoughts were as clear,
as the almost night sky.

- I totally adored this line - shows how cluttered your head is with thoughts and emotions and things that feel like they will never be gone, never be free from. Great way to show this by using that clear sky as your wish for your head to be clear.

on a early winters morning.

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This poem holds such a deep depression inside this character, but what makes it worse is that you have focused the poem on the things around you - the metaphors and the scenery, and then at the end you show the real emotion of feeling that loneliness. I again like how this is in the dark category, it can be put into a different context in the way of demons being ghosts like the title suggests, instead of ghosts and demons of the past.

Strong wording, and more great imagery from you!