I'm Khalid (Acrostic Fibonacci)

by Khalid M Darwish   Oct 9, 2012


I
must
kiss love
happily
as I fall in it
leaving all what I hate behind
irrespective of the person who I love or hate
Days compensating what I lack, replacing what I lose and I am in paradise

* The number of syllables in each line must equal the sum of the syllables in the two previous lines. So, start with 0 and 1, add them together to get your next number, which is also 1, 2 comes next, then add 2 and 1 to get 3, and so on. Fibonnaci: 0, 1, 1, 2, 3, 5, 8, 13, 21.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I suppose a Fibonacci isn't difficult to write but when you accompany it with an acrostic, it makes it harder but I think you managed to pull it off well...the message and that is quite good and straightforward and if I had to give some critique it would be that I felt the flow at the end seemed to lack something a little.

    But apart from that Khalid, a really good piece....

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    Fibonacci is a pattern I learned in my IT studies and implementing it in poems is really a challenge and you did it well... I like the message you put across and on that the pattern is wonderful:)

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