Comments : I'm Khalid (Acrostic Fibonacci)

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    Fibonacci is a pattern I learned in my IT studies and implementing it in poems is really a challenge and you did it well... I like the message you put across and on that the pattern is wonderful:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I suppose a Fibonacci isn't difficult to write but when you accompany it with an acrostic, it makes it harder but I think you managed to pull it off well...the message and that is quite good and straightforward and if I had to give some critique it would be that I felt the flow at the end seemed to lack something a little.

    But apart from that Khalid, a really good piece....