Brilliant! Sleeping with open eyes as a fear of death, nostalgia crawling up to you and smelling of his bitter lips thirty feet away. I loved your choice of thoughts by this way. You rocked it PinkyPrincess. Keep on penning.

I..I loved this piece so much from you.
You were a star in the contest. AMAZING.
Wanna' nominated this next week.
Chaww, Sarah:)

You are impeccable sara.... This is so flawless and the story you depicted is so full of twists and turns...! And I loved your story telling here... It is very descriptive!
Wish I could have nominated this.... !!!
Fabulous piece:)

What a superb write. Excellent piece.