by Autuumnbree
Aw...this is a very sad poem. It's true when we lose someone in death we want to see them again. I like that at the end of this heartbreaking piece you speak of seeing your love one again, those last lines definitely brings a light hope into the picture. |
Thank you. =) And I do believe that one day I will get to see her again. |
by NobodyKnowsItButMe
At first, I thought u were going to write a poem about break-ups and all...but Oh! Even worse... its kind of an elegy... |
Well thank you very much. And yeah, ok smarty pants ;) I text on the phone too much, I suppose. But thank you for giving me a heads up. I'll get right on fixing it =) |
by DeviousCharmer
I really liked it. it showed your pain and other emotions. very deep . things will get better, i hope. |
by ah satan 666
@.@!! |
OUTSTANDING, I fell in love with this form the first verse on, wonderful wording and describtion. I think this might be one of my favorites of yours too, maybe my top favorite, 100/100 100/100 100/100 100/100 |