I like this. So dark in its nature as if death it's self is issuing the punishment but living in hell for sins to others. Truly amazing!

I like this. So dark in its nature as if death it's self is issuing the punishment but living in hell for sins to others. Truly amazing!

Girl your very real, natural. Your good.

I'd be really curious to know where you fit in the picture (the jilted,the cheater,or third party interestedly or dis-interestedly making havoc with anothers relationship.it bears completely on my feeling of the poem.however,being so nicely written i'm ready to either give you a hug,a nasty look,or tell you to get your own damn man. lol