Fallen Angel ( Part 1 )

by Eddie Hoyte   Oct 10, 2012


Though kinda long...pls go thru it
I saw a body on the ground
Scared of running, i screamed
IN vain, maybe it;s a desert, no one around
Jesus! Jesus!! I called and it vanished like a dream

The body i saw, wasn't human
I could describe him without being told
like a god, he came to me took my hand
looked me in the face then i behold

The most beautiful lady I've ever saw
Her skin tone is like that of gold
her curves shaped smooth and raw
She smiled, oh my gosh, then my br4eath slowed
Her eyes were the cloud blue
And when she spoke
It was honest, sweet and true
But then i imagined why'd i woke

Looking at those eyes, i thought
God must be missing a lot for sending her away
Not knowing that my feelings are being bought
I knew i had to leave but wanted to stay

Her feet were shiny like brass
She sounded like the sweetest choir songs
Her hair were long, and shone like a polished glass
Ten she kissed me, This I've waited for long

It sent shivers down into my soul
My feet trembling, i felt cold
He caresses gave me back strength and made me whole
I stood motionless, like I've been strucked with thunder bolt

I longed for her body in mine
It came and i felt i was a lucky guy
After this night we'd be doing just fine
But then i saw hell came to me in twinkle of an eye

This beauty queen changed
To a beast like a dragon
My whole life had been re-arranged
The Devil from the book of revelation

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  • 11 years ago

    by Blood of a Lion

    Very good I liked sections of it but needs some serious editing. Otherwise its really good, great work, I know these kind of works take time.
    5/5