Fix

by MyHalozChokinMe   Oct 10, 2012


It took me awhile to swallow
you whole but once I could taste
it on my tongue it was easy and
the feeling just slipped
right down.

Then, all at once
emotions came calling
and my mind was gone
and all I can do is
feel high and giddy.

Hyper and happy.

Childish and dreamy.

Hazy and full of fluff.

I giggle and bounce
and I am lifted away
into air-made whirlpools,
into the little cyclones
that frame deserted
playgrounds.

At first I was reluctant
to succumb because it
felt oh-so-unappetizing
and I was content with
my current state of mind.

But, I dared to take a
bite, my resistance was
futile and now the feeling
just keeps going and going
until it's gone and I find

I need

another

fix.

(What have you done to me?)

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  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Well done for this win, sorry it took so long to catch up :(

    It is funny reading your work because no matter what sunject you write about you always use such unique words and different layouts and it is like you have this mark which you carry through all your poems, a signiture that it is yours!

    you described this well about how you feel addicted but at the same time there was something trying to stop you from getting into it, insecurities probably.

    Anywa, great write and I am glad to see you still writing l o v e poems .xx

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Whatever circumstance you're in got you a win!! Congrats! I'm in love with this poem!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Aweeeeesome piece! Your poetry is so so good and the couple of love poems youve posted are fantastic, in your writing you always have such a great way of showing and describing emotion, and in this write, it is no different, i know these write come more difficult to you perhaps than others but they are wonderful, as always your word choice and flow is spot on and i was smiling reading he three seperated lines....very cool Cara, i glad chels nominated other wise i would have. Fantastic write :-))

  • 12 years ago

    by MyHalozChokinMe

    Thank you Chelsey.

    I really have not been known to "do love."

    Circumstance gives people motivation to write, I suppose.

    I feel like I'm learning a new style of writing. The "love" poems as of late are works in progress, while I find my niche and figure out what to do with this shit in my head.

    In a way, it's nice to know that I can attempt to scribble about more than just ugly, seething emotions.

    o.O

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Ok lady....you're getting another nomination from me..hahah seriously stop feeding us these lies of "I don't do love"...either the love bug has bitten you or you very good at B.S'ing ....

    This is so adorable it makes me want to fall in love..kind of lol

    Hyper and happy, childish and dreamy, hazy and full of fluff..

    ^ omg that is so cute....you're such a liar. You DO do love poems...I don't read love poetry much , usually just my own and Bens.....but, phew* I have now added this and you to my faves...

    I could ramble on and on about how amazing this is but I will just leave it at....youre getting my second nomination, and you received my first on the other love poem lol.

    Stunning. Really stunning.

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