by Cheyenne Oct 11, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Mummy, mummy. |
by Autuumnbree
This is serious subject and very touchy subject for many. Today many people feels it's OK to abort a baby but I am totally against such cruelness, I think that it's important for people to understand that's a life been taken. |
This is one poem where the juvenile wording is very powerful. Having said that I am going to give it what it deserves 5/5 |
by Love Fallacy
This is deep. Very powerful and emotional. Great write. |
by LostWords
Great job in writing about something so controversial in todays world. It started off sad and like an abortion poem does but then the hatred coming from this unborn child. It definitely gave me chills. Pro-life. |
by TSI25
Its about a pretty controversial topic, which makes it interesting, and i can tell you definitely feel very strongly about subject matter. it was emotional and dark yet jagged, an effect i assume you were going for as it conveys tension and fear. it was difficult to read both because of the flow, and because of the subject matter, but i am just one person and dont let that discourage you. |