This is indeed emotional and has so much to share gal... a sin so worse and I am glad you brought this up... I liked the flow and the emotions are to the optimum... Good attempt:)

Its about a pretty controversial topic, which makes it interesting, and i can tell you definitely feel very strongly about subject matter. it was emotional and dark yet jagged, an effect i assume you were going for as it conveys tension and fear. it was difficult to read both because of the flow, and because of the subject matter, but i am just one person and dont let that discourage you.

Great job in writing about something so controversial in todays world. It started off sad and like an abortion poem does but then the hatred coming from this unborn child. It definitely gave me chills. Pro-life.

This is deep. Very powerful and emotional. Great write.

This is one poem where the juvenile wording is very powerful. Having said that I am going to give it what it deserves 5/5

This is serious subject and very touchy subject for many. Today many people feels it's OK to abort a baby but I am totally against such cruelness, I think that it's important for people to understand that's a life been taken.