Comments : Spit n Post- Flaws

  • 12 years ago

    by MyHalozChokinMe

    I love this poem Andrea.

    I like how the first stanza, (in my mind, of course,) set the tone for what I was about to read:
    "I face the demise of looking into
    a mirror and seeing the breakdown
    of a woman who hides within the trees"

    (The trees was a dead give away btw :P)

    I don't want to break down any of this poem, I think each stanza accomplished what it needed to. The reader knows exactly what you meant to say and for me, each pulled emotion from me.

    I think you're an inspiration to writers, and most probably an inspiration to those who are lucky enough to have you in their lives.

    "I'll always know
    I'm a precious soul, because I've lived
    to write this poem and what it takes
    to have the guts to share it."

    You my dear, have more guts than I. =)

    I'll end my rambling and leave with this:

    This was a solid piece, and only increased the admiration that I've developed towards your poems and you as a woman, thank you for sharing.

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Well done Maple for this win, you really put it all into this which is really brave of you because I know you like hiding some parts of you and your life.

    I love how you took this challenge and made this from it. Well done and I hope you felt great after writing this and sharing it.