Didnot sweetie put a space in between these two words okay sweetie? and i love this poem it's dark and everything just one little thing you should put what the others truly want in detail i know it will be longer the poem but it would nice to know what the others want in detail so we can have a better image of what YOU dont' want to see in a better tomorrow lol 5/5
Lady Ashes

Very raw and emotive.... Bahot acha he... Bas god par bharosa rakho.... All will be well:)

You are an excellent poet. Your words are full of deep emotions.
"Life didnot came to me with an instruction book"
"It saw the pain of my life, that no one else did see"......These lines are very sad and beautiful.