Wow.. This was truly amazing. First off, it's got a good imagery in it, and has a good word flow too. Love poems always show such depth of emotions that you feel for that significant other and this one most certainly did. Greattt job :) ((5))
~Harlea

Wow.. This was truly amazing. First off, it's got a good imagery in it, and has a good word flow too. Love poems always show such depth of emotions that you feel for that significant other and this one most certainly did. Greattt job :) ((5))
~Harlea

Umm... Tony?
I love it :).

Nominated <3

You are such a brilliant writer, So envious hehe
you can just feel it and see this happening as you read the poem. The title made me curious what it was about. It flows so perfectly :)

love love love

Aww, this is such a sweet love poem, you really set the mood of the scene in the beginning leading up to the first kiss, describing how much he adores the sight of her and how he feels to be beside her.

It is beautiful when the guitar comes out... very romantic!

Nice job.

So much imagery and very romantic. I think this is a woman's dream... laying out under the stars/moon next to the one she loves and having him play a love song just for them...ending the night with their first kiss.