Pardon me, I suppose I may be a bit
too blunt. Perhaps I should sit quietly, hand
over my mouth?

But, that wouldn't be much fun would it?

After all, that is neither the purpose of my
hand or my mouth, at least not as I see it.

- lol. I love love love this line. This is so true and that should be plastered all over billboards on an advert! I think this is the best line of the whole poem, I love it!

As for your poem, I like it in the style of it is aimed at the reader but it is like you are having a conversation with yourself. In the battle of doing what others want you to do and then doing what you want to do.

You open the poem with being frustrated and stating that you have had enough, this leads me to think you are letting off steam within this poem which makes it that much more powerful because the emotions then flow out and this is when the truth comes out without treading on eggshells.

Nice work.