Any girls pimp

by nightmaRs chaOs   Oct 12, 2012


Let me go from these chains
before the terror overhead reins
you creep into my dreams
my life is tearing at the seams
your going to pay for what you've done
this game is over and i have one
your on your knees
begging me please
i have no mercy for this
night will bring a deathly kiss
i have come back for you
oh this is not nearly through
i strip you of your clothes
from your head to your toes
you are going to pay for your crime
and your soon going to run out of time
you cannot see me but i can see you
your not going to like what i'm going to do
i may be dead you may have ended me
but what you have done is your fee
were going to play a game
now your going to feel the same
this knife that i hold will decide your fate
oh look your time has run late
i watch you close your eyes
i love these sweet goodbyes
your body goes limp
and you are no longer any girls pimp

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  • 12 years ago

    by Darren

    Two nit first of all

    line 5 should be 'you're' plus all the 'i' should be 'I'

    apart from that.....

    The pace in this was electric, the rhyme scheme helped hugely, but what makes this piece is the pure raw emotion, there is real hatred all the way through.

    good write

    • 12 years ago

      by nightmaRs chaOs

      Thank you but the only reason why my i's are not capitalized is the fact that i was too lazy to do it lol