Wow! Theyre all just words but with the way you wrote this, you can just see the beauty and colors that youre talkin about. Good one, no, make that very good. :) |
by Chelsey
Mannn I could so use a dip in a waterfall right now... |
by Baby Rainbow
Such a simple and beautiful poem, the scene is desrcibred so beautifully and I am so jealous when I am reading this. I love rainbows and love colours, and the idea of a rainbow coloured waterfall and little pond, I can get a strong sense of the feeling of freedom you describe when you are splashing through it and stepping on all of the difference colours. |