Comments : Multicolored

  • 12 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    Wow! Theyre all just words but with the way you wrote this, you can just see the beauty and colors that youre talkin about. Good one, no, make that very good. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Mannn I could so use a dip in a waterfall right now...

    Very pretty imagery here Harlea! <3 I love the use of "flooring" here. I don't know why that made me love your last stanza...I could feel the limestone on my feet as I read it ..

    Nicely written :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Such a simple and beautiful poem, the scene is desrcibred so beautifully and I am so jealous when I am reading this. I love rainbows and love colours, and the idea of a rainbow coloured waterfall and little pond, I can get a strong sense of the feeling of freedom you describe when you are splashing through it and stepping on all of the difference colours.

    Such a beautiful and relaxing poem. well done