by Chelsey Oct 12, 2012
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
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by Baby Rainbow
Chels Chels!! I love this! You are so good at slam poetry. |
Chels, woo i can take this seriously now. lol I love some of the imagery in this write....though i did chuckle at big boy panties. I have only heard that term referred to girls. guys don't take things as serious as us girls and you are right we are crying and they live it up. but usually we get our heads and wits back and then its revenge. sad part is you could tell most men this all day long and they never realize it was a result of how they first acted. Awesome job on this. |
by Tara Kay
I really didn't feel like reading a love poem yet I live your new style so I wantes to read it cos I love you darling...i.do and rhis was so.in ya face like.it shoud be...it was catchy and deep and so strong and wjen.i het on the laptop i.will promise to check.out thw.link and.listen. |
Chels, i know this is a love poem but just wanted to point out an error that kind of took away the seriousness of the poem. balls of holly should be boughs of holly. lol. my daughters name is holly and she said she don't have those. seriously....when you fix it let me know so i can take it serious and i will leave a better comment. I know you won't get offended as your sense of humor is like mine...warped. take care dear. |
by Chelsey
Lmfao. I'm so blonde its ridiculous. Thanks Kay. |
Chelsey, Chelsey, Chelsey, how many times did I call you?. You nailed it right on the hall of fame again and again. This is just out of this realm. Your creativity is just limitless and I just don't know what to say. I'm literally mute, you sure know how to cast a spell in poetry. |