Wow wow

I' am not a doggy but I can still wow.
I like this poem Stephen, Goddess. It runs smoothly except on one part where it says sun rays beaming through every window... I am not sure if that was just me but I usually semi stop when there is a line break and that's what I did with that line.

When I read it I sort of stop at Sun rays

So my suggestion is move the "beaming" to the next line.

More intense than sun rays
Beaming through every window.

Sort of like that.

Well, I guess it's better to wait until someone else suggests lol. It might just be me. Other than that, I like this. It felt real.

She fills the emptiness in my heart
with the love she has within hers;
finishes my sentences when
I've only spoken half the words.

lovely piece ..stephen..