Black and White (His Poem)

Ok so now ive had a week to get over the initial. Shock of what this poem did to me. I can breath out!!

This poem rocked my world, the images you pulled were out of. This f**King world, im mean seriously, this is one powerful piece that just shook me to my core...what can i say but this poem is a complete reflection of you.....mind blowingly beautiful and i just love love love it. It spoke to me in so many ways i even after weeks i cant comment properly...you wreck me xx

Aww, I love the contrast here of the black and white but at the same time you end it with such colourful views on the relationship and the future.

Like the tide

when tugged by moonlight,

with every thought

to fall and rise, I feel

I can't possibly love you more

than I do today.

But tomorrow always comes

with a brand-new me, who only sees

how little I loved you

yesterday.

- I loved this little part so much, when you feel the love growing and don't think it could grow any more and then the next day it feels like yesterday's love was nothing in comparison to what you feel now.

Beautiful poem.

Just beautiful.....someone has been bitten. I officially see it. These poems don't just come from anywhere ya know , seriously from the heart. And I love what you are penning lately. Gorgeous love poetry. And typically I'm turned off by rhyming, but I didn't mind this at all because if you write a rhyming poem you have to use creative wording so it doesn't seem "simple" and "cliche" and well...just boring. But this was far from all of those. The reader definitely can sense the love and the new turn of events for a "sad poem" writer lol.

Loved!

This was simply beautiful. That's all I can say at the moment. Great job :) (5)
~Harlea