Comments : Beautiful Heart

  • 12 years ago

    by Wild flower

    So true she doesnt care whether its your worst or best:) But shes sure that everything written by you is great, and she only cares about what its holding<3

    She always try's to be there as much as she can. And she really loves you..

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    A beautiful description of your friendship and a wonderful dedication to a friend who means a lot to you... Such poems have so much of trust, love and honesty depicted towards the one whom you adore as your best one... And you have portrayed all this so beautifully. :)

    I adore the grace
    of the shadow face
    that lifts my spirits free.

    ^^
    A beautiful start. Very fresh and shows how the appearance of your friend makes you happy, cheerful and gay... How a friend's company is so refreshing and lovely.

    She is the flower
    with all the power
    that loves me for me.

    ^^
    It is so required that we should have a friend who loves and adores you for what you are... And what better than this verse...

    When I'm alone,
    upon my throne,
    she is by my side.

    ^^
    A friend is one who be's with you when you are alone and whatever your state, never leaves you..

    It's not enough
    to try and bluff,
    with her I can not hide.

    ^^
    When you have friends who understand your silence, you can never hide your emotions from them and that's what makes a blisful relation.

    So here I rest,
    not writing my best
    but in her eyes she doesn't care.

    ^^
    You feel yes you cannot write something which can describe them to the optimum, still your friend will value and cherish your write with its simple beauty.

    This poem is from the heart
    our friendship will never part,
    she is with me in my hour of despair.

    ^^
    Something from the heart can never be false and the best friendship poem I ever encountered... Beautiful:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Awww this was so sweet. I love this dedication to her, your friendship is so special :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is such a sweet poem. I love how you rhymed it as it is nice to see it rhyme from you.

    the friendship here is very strong and things like this is worth holding onto, especially in the dark times.

    I also like when you say "not writing my best but she doesnt care." Real friends appreciate the effort and the thought and they do love us for who we are, that is what makes it so beautiful and unique. A special kind of friendship which we can rely on no matter how we are feeling.

    Beautiful dedication.