Liz

by Baby Rainbow   Oct 14, 2012


Last night you took your life away
In one moment you were gone,
Zapped from the world you lived in.

Patience had ran out for you
And you gave up trying to fight.
The pain was just too much to bare
Even with your friends support.
Remember love itself lives on
So forever loved you will still be.
Of course you will be truly missed but
Now you can rest in peace.

Saffie
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14/10/12

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  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    I'm so sorry. </3
    My heart is breaking for you.

    I love that you made her name into an acrostic, it's beautiful.

    RIP Liz.

  • 12 years ago

    by Wild flower

    Now a days some people I know are going through hard times losing someone, and some other things, I dunno why its on the same time.
    Rest in peace..

    This piece truly made me feel the emotion here., came straight from your heart, really heartfelt, great job Saffie..

    Wish you the very best:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    So sorry for your loss sweetheart. These poems are too hard to comment on because its way too personal. However I just want to say I love that this was an acrostic, a dedication to her and her life. Very beautiful. Stay strong and may you find peace and comfort during this time. <3  

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