<sun's reflection> just add the apostrophe.

I have no idea why you did not punctuate, but this is a MASTERPIECE from you.
I loved it so so so much.

Your opening felt (creativity and format wise) perfect.

I think the 1st and 3rd stanzas are more powerful, but anyway... very well done with this.

Amazing poem I agree with Abed a lil punctuation would be cool in here

but come on this poem the tone and the way you wrote it; charming. I dk what to say on this seriously I love this so much they way you connected it to cold winter and the way you repeated those lines was fantastic

really great job
welcome back btw

This is beautiful and tragic. I love the metaphors and the repetition. It made your story eerie, even though the imagery in the first stanza and most of second suggested otherwise, and I could tell that your story wouldn't have a happy ending. Excellent job.