by Chelsey Oct 15, 2012
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Forgive me, |
I really like the strong imagery you have put in this poem. It's clever. And strong. I love the idea of a human being a utopia for someone. I can see clearly, your control. It takes talent to really be able to do that. I think it all flows very well, and none of it seems too simple. I only question why you began it the way you did? It's just new to me c: |
by Baby Rainbow
Forgive me, |
No wonder, you're so talented chels, making those lines make me stunned, I can't imagine how you construct it between lines...I search about Utopia, and yet imaginary as it is, so as your piece is as imaginary as it is too. |
by Tara Kay
I can't tell you how this made me feel, it was just so touching, it was really deep but not soppy and cliche, it was beautifully worded, gentle and calm, full of that sweet kind of love for someone...that really warm sort of feeling. |
Absolutely beautiful! I adored every line from start to finish. I find it funny sometimes how we can love someone or something so much...we can barely find the words to describe it's meaning. But I definitely applaud you, and your work here. |