A Normal Day

Lost in a world of surprise,
entagled in webbed finger
points and regection,
you wrapped illusions
around passion, and
called me beautiful.

- great opening, spelling error: Rejection.

I tasted the fire of
your eyes and ran
away with the sand,
still moist between
my toes, flavored
each flirtation with
a hint of lemon drops,
as our kisses stood
alone in the doorway
after two am....

- this is soooo soppy and romantic and I love it. It reminded me of the scenes in films where they do these things in the beach and the little kisses in doorways. i never hear about them in real life though, but your imagery makes it seem so real.

our slumber is a honeymoon
and it makes the reality
of my love for you
even sweeter in the
shadows of a normal day

- Aww that is beautiful, genuinely lovely poem and well put together.

I love your tone here, made feel that you're comfortable after somethings going on, and the normal day that passes by you with the person you love:)

Great job..

Ah, such a lovely poem Maple :) this was awe-inspiring to me. Gosh, I just can't say more than just Beautiful and outstanding job on this! :)